B.
The Crime: A woman in her sixties is discovered with her throat stabbed
in her private box. There are no witnesses as the curtains had been closed over
the front of the box. Her many jewels remain untouched. The nature of the
stabbing seems very personal.
C.
The Murderer: Katherine Carter was born into a privileged family. Her
father owned a multimillion-dollar company, which her elder brother would
inherit he passed. Kate had always been close with her brother and she lived
her entire life under the belief that she would be taken care of financially by
him, never having to spend a day behind a desk in the corporation. Unburdened by
any financial want, Kate planned to spend her life creating modern art, which
was her passion in life. Not long after Kate’s 23rd birthday, her
mother confessed that her elder brother, Jeffery, was the result of an affair. Though the Ms. Carter didn't admit who the lover was, Jeffery's biological father was Mark McQueen, the chorographer for the Royal Ballet. Betrayed and heartbroken,
Mr. Carter divorced his wife and disinherited Jeffery, leaving the company,
family legacy and responsibility completely to Kate. Kate’s family and her
future as an artist have been smashed by her mother’s infidelity. Kate and her
father happen to attend the ballet the same night that her mother does. Jeffery
appears in the theater as well and Kate, overjoyed to see her brother again
slips from her father’s box before the show begins to find him. When Kate finds
Jeffery he confesses to her that he has discovered the identity of his biological
father. Kate is enraged that her mother has the audacity to show her face at
the ballet again and seemingly rub it all in. Jeffery tries to calm his half
sister but fails to do so. The two part ways and Kate heads towards her
mother’s box. On her way she grabs an ice pick from the refreshment table in
the hall. The mother and daughter fight and during the conflict Kate grabs a
locket from her mother’s neck that holds a picture of her brother and herself
and smashes it. Kate stabs her mother in the jugular as the lights fade in the
theater. Her gloves are stained with blood so she replaces them her mother’s and
heads to the ladies room where she freshens up before returning to her family
box and watching the rest of the ballet. She intends on murdering Mr. McQueen,
her mother’s lover as well for his part in the scandal but it caught by the detective
before she can finish the job.
D.
The Detective: Bridget Franks is a soon to be New York Police Officer. She
had recently joined the academy and intends to eventually become a detective. Her
brother, Cedric, is engaged to a wealthy young woman, Violet MacDouglas, whose
family is part of the upper class social circle of New York. In order to
introduce his Tomboy sister to his future family in law and fiancé Cedric invites,
or rather insists, that Bridget attend the ballet Swan Lake with them. Bridget
is clearly out of place in the theater setting and the meeting does not go
well. Violet is very sweet but somewhat of a lightweight and despite her best efforts
to connect with Bridget the two don’t share any common interests. The
MacDouglas disapprove of the upcoming marriage and sticks their nose up at the middle
class Franks. Over the course of the night the soon to be sisters in law bond
over their efforts to solve the murder case and Violet becomes the Watson to
Bridget’s Sherlock.
Bridget discovers the body of Ms. Carter after mistakenly
enter her box instead of her own. The police are called. Ignoring her brother’s
protests, Bridget sets out to figure out who the murder is before the ballet
ends and the crowds disperse. Upon questioning the MacDouglas family who were
associated with the Carters, she learns of the scandal and discovers that the entire
family is at the ballet at evening. After inspecting the body of the deceased
woman Bridget notices a pair of bloody opera gloves lay beside body. Everyone
assumes they must belong to Ms. Carter but Bridget finds it suspicious that
they were not on the woman’s hands. The vicious manner in which she was
attacked with an ice pick and the fact that none of her jewelry is missing save
for a locket suggest a personal attack. The smashed locket was discarded in the
hall. Engraved inside it was the inscription “For my loving mother”. Bridget
and Violet believe that Jeffery Carter must be responsible for the murder. A
staff member of the theater confirms that he saw Jeffery walking the halls
before beginning of the first act and that he looked quite flustered. Bridget
and Violet come across Kate in the ladies room as she is calmly reapplying
powder. Bridget decides not to distress Kate with the new of her mother’s death
and the fact that her brother is a murderer just yet. Kate forgets her gloves
in the ladies room and Violet picks them up to return to her later. Bridget and
Violet are unable to find Jeffery and fear that he might be going after Mr.
McQueen as well. When they go to warn Mr. McQueen in his box he is demands to
know where Violet got the gloves she is holding. The girls discover that the
gloves have Ms. Carters and Mr. McQueen’s initials on them and were in fact a
gift from McQueen to his lover. This leads Bridget to the conclusion that Kate
must have switched her gloves with her mother’s after committing the murder. The
two woman track Kate down, who attempts to escape through the back stage of the
theater. The chase ends when Bridget tackles Kate, tumbling on stage and taking
out the prima ballerina as her character Odette is about to commit suicide.
The setting is really well thought out. It is very unexpected because when I think of the ballet I think of a joyful night out. This murder mystery has a lot of action in it. There is a lot going on and I love that you created a lot of drama within the family. The criminal Kate is a great character for a murder story. You made her very angry and it sounded like she hated a lot of people. I was hoping she would get caught the entire time I was reading it. I love the concept of the gloves. In my opinion, the gloves are kind of the symbol for this story. Kate thought she was making a smart decision in switching the gloves at the time of the murder, but the gloves are why she got caught. I also like how if Kate didn't get caught their would of been another murder. It shows how angry she was and how she didn't care if she continued to murder. She didn't mind murdering people. Her anger added a lot of suspense throughout the story. :)
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